Oh. I read this at work, which was probably a mistake. I a bit flushed now.

That was very, very wonderful. All the physical decriptions were so sensuous and evocative- the sensations of smell and touch, the descriptions of their clothes.

I liked how you managed their realisation of what they *really* felt about their sons being together, ie, jealous, with Nikki being the catalyst. The progression from that conversation to them then having sex felt very natural.

I think you made this work well - and it's a difficult plot to make work, partly because people might think it far-fetched. Which is ironic, because sitations like this happen all too easily in real life, but in fiction, for reasons it would take a psychologist, or possibly a sociologist, years to explain, we tend to think, '*no way* - these two guys have wanted each other for decades, then their sons fall in love? I can't believe it'

I never thought that for one moment, which I think says something good about your narrative skill:-)