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Cimorene ([personal profile] cimorene) wrote2004-11-28 07:19 pm

helpful hints for writing romance and slash no. 1,600,042

if, while you're writing slashfic, some poignantly pertinent lyrics come to your mind as inspiration but they don't really fit the tone of canon--for example, cohen/wainwright/whassis' "halleljuh" during the fast and the furious--keep it to yourself.

don't quote them.*

*the same applies to poetry. ESPECIALLY t.s. eliot.

[identity profile] cimness.livejournal.com 2004-11-28 06:56 pm (UTC)(link)
sadly, one of the best pieces pieces of slash in kirk/spock is saved from being really satisfying, the sort of thing you can't pick nits from, ONLY by the fact that EVERY section is headed with t.s. eliot. i mean, what a way to go! she loses like fifty points just from THAT, and meanwhile it's better written (aside from i mean) than the majority of its peers, besides being rather, well, fresh. a source of constant distress, mate.

see for yourself:
http://www.waxjism.org/cimorene/trek/anothercountrybeckons.txt