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merry/pippin rec
ACK! this one was really good. i mean, i actually held my breath. i tensed every muscle towards the end i think.
sneaky tricks for spurious tension, perhaps, in that at the moments of highest tension it was still perfectly clear what ending you were creeping up on. if you know what i mean. nonetheless:
a dolls' heart by venenatus venustas; merry/pippin, pg. some poor dialogue towards the end, some possibly questionable characterization towards the middle. overall very good. sweet. rather innocent shirefic, pre-quest, about growing up, with a sort of teen movie plot. but no, it really does work. i mean, i wouldn't have missed reading it for the world. i'm sure i'll want to read it again.
sneaky tricks for spurious tension, perhaps, in that at the moments of highest tension it was still perfectly clear what ending you were creeping up on. if you know what i mean. nonetheless:
a dolls' heart by venenatus venustas; merry/pippin, pg. some poor dialogue towards the end, some possibly questionable characterization towards the middle. overall very good. sweet. rather innocent shirefic, pre-quest, about growing up, with a sort of teen movie plot. but no, it really does work. i mean, i wouldn't have missed reading it for the world. i'm sure i'll want to read it again.