Hmmm. I probably have a similar problem actually, now that I think about. I'll have to take a look at my current two rough drafts and rummage around. I definitely use "rather" too often.
But, uh, on a similar thread, I have 2,000 words of Tezuryo in Word right now, and I think I finally know what I'm doing, and it's trundling along towards the end quite nicely. But... there's... sex and stuff in it, and it's not just vaguely-described, either, and most definitely not of a R rating and... can I send it to you when I'm done because it's so long since I've written anything like this, I'm sort of flapping my hands and squeaking.
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But, uh, on a similar thread, I have 2,000 words of Tezuryo in Word right now, and I think I finally know what I'm doing, and it's trundling along towards the end quite nicely. But... there's... sex and stuff in it, and it's not just vaguely-described, either, and most definitely not of a R rating and... can I send it to you when I'm done because it's so long since I've written anything like this, I'm sort of flapping my hands and squeaking.