A story shows signs of promise but is marred by a significant flaw.
OMG THIS ONE NO QUESTION. The first one, I can just back button and be done with. But the second one, I'm pained by. I want to fix it. And it's a million times worse if there's something I want to say about the story, if the signs of promise are really promising and something I'd love to discuss if not for the significant flaw.
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OMG THIS ONE NO QUESTION. The first one, I can just back button and be done with. But the second one, I'm pained by. I want to fix it. And it's a million times worse if there's something I want to say about the story, if the signs of promise are really promising and something I'd love to discuss if not for the significant flaw.