THINGS IN FIC WHICH ARE ON NOTICE:

[cimorene]

(As far as I can tell the Stephen Colbert On Notice Generator has gafiated.)

1. "pucker"


2. "greedy" (to describe the anus)


3. "spilling hotly"


4. "so hot. so tight"


5. "his lower regions"


6. "that bundle of nerves"


7. "the evidence of his desire"


8. "erotic" in the middle of a sex scene


9. "warm fluid"


10. "his shaft"


11. "his cloth-covered length"


12. "drifting south" (or "South", which is even funnier)


13. "heat in his groin"


14. "a hardness"


15. "corresponding hardness" ("Dear language center:...")


16. "tweaked a nipple"

Comments

[anatsuno]

no no, no shame!! it's an issue of overexposure, not of anything being inherently bad (if that ever means anything - but even if). No shame. I support your writing ways. :))

[rakshi]

Well, bless you and thanks. But it IS odd. I think about the time I've spent sitting in front of my computer trying to come up with new and exciting ways to say 'red and leaking' and I just have to laugh my ass off.

This whole discussion is wonderful.