But even in the event she couldn't do anything more, I still wanted to see what she was thinking about it a bit more - just more of a solid through-thread about it, I guess.
With the plots always having multiple issues and problems going on at the same time, everything got hectic and tangled and it's easy for some things to fall out of focus, so perhaps it could have used some strategic highlighting.
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With the plots always having multiple issues and problems going on at the same time, everything got hectic and tangled and it's easy for some things to fall out of focus, so perhaps it could have used some strategic highlighting.