misplaced modifiers 101

[cimorene]

Will broke the kiss, then traced a finger over Jack’s hard nipples. "Let’s get these off you." here

AHAHAHAHAHAHAH.

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[jrivka.livejournal.com]

ow.

[cimness.livejournal.com]

that's going on my Top Ten List of Things You Don't Want To Hear During Sex.

[jrivka.livejournal.com]

mine too. ow ow ow. *covers nipples protectively*