cimorene: cartoony drawing of a woman's head in profile giving dubious side-eye (Default)
Cimorene ([personal profile] cimorene) wrote2004-03-09 10:50 pm

one last beta plea:

more than 100K of singin in the rain-based threesome fic, revised to nc-17 rating, 45-page length, hopefully funny and uplifting. i mean, i can just post without a beta, but it's *awfully* long for that.

[identity profile] petronelle.livejournal.com 2004-03-18 04:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Huh; it doesn't look dark to me. Perhaps it's a screen difference. When I get ambitious again I may well lighten it. Thanks for the comment.

Yes, it is my favorite scene, actually. They're so Cute.

I can't write SitR very /well/ -- the vaudevillian banter does not come naturally to me -- but I've tried. My fic site (http://romantic.frenchboys.net/petra/) has a brief Don/Cosmo, a threesome drabble, and Kathy/Lena simply because I wanted to see if it could work.

I may have to friend you likewise.

[identity profile] cimness.livejournal.com 2004-03-19 11:57 am (UTC)(link)
ah, you're probably right.

this monitor is my uncle's, and it's high-res and very expensive but weird. sometimes things (particularly screencaps, grr) show up dark and hard to distinguish.

i read your little snippets but they're mere mouthfuls! so short! i couldn't make myself read kathy/lina. it's just so... ah. you know. i *was* thinking about putting lina with zelda. i think that could work.