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Cimorene ([personal profile] cimorene) wrote2004-06-20 12:56 am

How We Look At Pictures: A Basic Art Crit Lesson

this was sparked by the miniwank here. (ETA: link fixed)   [livejournal.com profile] taradiane posted this picture of daniel radcliffe.



[livejournal.com profile] wayfairer said the childsploitation made her uncomfortable and asked for a cut-tag.  lots of people took offense and/or got snotty.  the lady protested too much.  no one ELSE was bothered by the childsploitation.  he's just a kid; kids crouch in that position all the time.  was she some kind of sicko, getting turned on?  etc etc etc.  she was uncomfortable with the suggestive pose; they denied there was one. 

let's put it this way:  the suggestive composition.  that picture is designed to draw the eye to daniel's crotch. 

it's not that the photographer necessarily made a crotch bull's eye and lined dan up in front of it; it's that no artist, no professional photographer, lines up a shot unaware of what he or she is doing.  photographers look through the viewfinder, and they don't see just "kid crouching on pedestal with caterpillar brows": they see the image of lines and colors and highlights and dynamics that is going to exist in the photograph.  they don't see the person--they see the work of art.

let's study how this works. 

we'll start with something very easy.


unless otherwise noted all images are winners at winners at art renewal dot org's salon competition for modern artists

this is a landscape painting, very simply rendered, with the details deliberately blurred.  look at it and ask yourself where you start looking, and how your eye travels through the picture, picking up details.  there are several factors that influence your eye, but they mainly have to do with highlights--the lightest, or the highest contrast, will draw the eye right away--and with the lines making up the picture.  your eye doesn't skip around like a bouncy ball.  it follows the lines.  it does this in candid photographs, in the mona lisa, in LJ icons, in website layouts, in this painting, and in pinup (and non-pinup) posters of stars like daniel. 

here's my markup of the picture.  the highlights are circled; the main path of the eye is drawn in red arrows.  secondary highlights are a darker, browny color.  the pink arrows are where your eye goes after it reaches the ends of the red arrows; the purple arrows are tertiary. 



see?  how about another easy one?


came up in a google image search for 'avocado' i did last week

that extra, brighter yellow circle is pointing out the likeliest starting point for your eye in the picture.  it's also quite likely you'd start with the avocado, stay riveted for a bit, then follow the pink arrows out and the red arrows back in.  the path of the eye in pictures is always circular--it starts at the main points and gradually takes in the less interesting things until it's grabbed all the details it wants, and got back to its starting points; then it follows the red arrows again.

here's another person:


in that one, all the highlights are concentrated at the center of the image, and the contrast is very high.  it's hard to make yourself focus on the details of drapery around the girl at all.  notice how that purple fabric forms the bottom part of a wedge shape whose point is her head again.  from there the eye goes straight back down to the pitcher.

here's one with an X-shaped composition--that is, strong diagonal lines meeting in the center.  the picture of dan has the same composition.


a google image search on 'lemon lime'

your eye goes straight to the two leafy lemons in the center.

here's one penultimate one.  for one thing, i really love this picture.  for another, it's got one HUGELY powerful dominant line of movement, which makes one fewer than in the picture of dan.  of course, once you've slithered down the one your eye is left looking for others, and the journey through the background is unusually complex.



same drill: highlights and secondary highlights; main line, secondary and tertiary lines.  lookit her wee toe!  what the marks don't really emphasize is that the serpentinish wedge-shape of highlights down the side of the model's body is the real center of the picture.  the side of her face, her arm and breast, her hip and the side of that one leg, all form a wedge between the pink and red lines.  that wedge is nearly impossible to tear your eyes from.  the real center is her breast--partly because it actually is in the center; partly because of the contrast, with the lighter highlight and the dark nipple;  and partly because of the lines pointed out by the red and pink arrows which point to it.  the nipple is where the eye ends up, which is why there are a red and a pink line which point away from it as well as the ones which indicate it.  the ones following the sides of the central wedge/model's body are probably where your eye goes first, but it doesn't take it long to wind up at the nipple.

now, the picture of dan isn't so simple as the citrus one; it doesn't have diagonals which lead STRAIGHT to the center.  here's my marked version:


the eye starts at his face.  it's light, it's round, it's positioned high and centrally, and the face is the natural starting point on a person.  a line leads down the center of his chest to his crotch.  the slopes of his shoulders, another route from the face, lead to secondary highlights... and from there take you to the thighs.  lines go from knee to crotch too.  and the slices of arm are symmetrical and form a sideways hourglass there where they're cut off by his sleeves and his thighs--the arms are the bottoms of it, and the center is his stomach.  you notice the ACTUAL center is his stomach.  why does the eye go down?  probably it has not yet explored the bottom of the picture this early in the game.  when it encounters the vertical central line, then, it will quite likely go down and not up.  also, there's an arrow-shape, rather high-contrast, made by the white negative space between his knees.  that arrow points to the crotch; the eye follows an arrow, or a wedge, from the wide to the narrow part.  and finally (although i've shrunken the picture so it's harder to tell), there are very subtle highlights--the gold thread/seams of his jeans, at the bottom of the fly and the center of the legs, make wee dots, and the inner leg seams are also very faint arrows leading to these points.  the crotch is the focal point. 

what it means that his crotch is the focal point of the image is up to individual interpretation.  i'm not calling it childsploitation, but i think you'd have to be nuts to say it wasn't suggestive.  not shouting--but CROTCH-->SEX is a quite natural leap, and not a very long one, in my book.

*well, one might say peace sign-shaped.

[identity profile] ex-thewayout304.livejournal.com 2004-06-19 11:11 pm (UTC)(link)
(your link at the very top is broken)

[identity profile] cimness.livejournal.com 2004-06-20 07:01 am (UTC)(link)
oh bugger. gah. i don't feel like fixing it right now.

[identity profile] southpaw526.livejournal.com 2004-06-19 11:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Okay, I've been lusting madly drooling over this boy for weeks now, and I do not see anything remotely exploitative about that picture. I don't even really find it that suggestive. If he were wearing, I dunno, loose shorts or something, maybe. But to look at this and immediately think 'childsploitation'? That mind was probably in the gutter before they saw the pic.

YMMV.

[identity profile] ex-thewayout304.livejournal.com 2004-06-19 11:35 pm (UTC)(link)
i think its very suggestive. but i don't think it's distasteful, either. kids his age are bursting with sexuality, and the photographer just captured that.

yes, as cim has so aptly shown, the crotch is the focal point of the picture. but can you really SEE anything? no.

i dunno. its a fine line. personally i dont see anything here to start a scandal over. "fourteen-year-old pubescent boy has crotch, isn't afraid to show it! news at eleven!"

[identity profile] southpaw526.livejournal.com 2004-06-19 11:49 pm (UTC)(link)
I guess I can see why it would be called suggestive. To me, it would be suggestive if, say, his thighs were spread or something. But here, it's 'very pretty 14 year old boy in nice shirt crouching'.

But hell, yay for blooming sexuality! *cheers*

[identity profile] ex-thewayout304.livejournal.com 2004-06-19 11:52 pm (UTC)(link)
err, but his thighs are spread. i mean, he isn't completely spread-eagled, but.

yup

[identity profile] kwirbx.livejournal.com 2004-06-20 04:38 am (UTC)(link)
too bad no one that matters gives a shit. enjoy your hell.

[identity profile] cimness.livejournal.com 2004-06-20 06:56 am (UTC)(link)
what do YOU mean by 'thighs spread'? ::frown:: his thighs are apart. is that not enough to qualify?

[identity profile] cimness.livejournal.com 2004-06-20 07:01 am (UTC)(link)


thank you. ::is still fuming::

[identity profile] cimness.livejournal.com 2004-06-20 07:06 am (UTC)(link)
no no that's my whole point. the point of my post is that the layout of the picture is inescapably suggestive, of CROTCH at least.

your mind does NOT have to be in the gutter to call a picture focused on a crotch suggestive. the crotch is the clear center of the picture--see above. CROTCH-->SEX is not a big leap. there's no exhaustive proof of that above, but i guess if you can't agree with that you just don't live in the same reality i live in.

aja simply thinks a suggestive, crotch-centric picture of a fourteen-year-old [pubescent] boy is childsploitation. i don't think your mind has to be in the gutter to think that any more than your average slasher's mind--i'd say you have to be a little uptight, or have some big age-hangups.

also: you mean... like... loose enough to see up the leg-holes? cause fitted pants and jeans are generally considered more suggestive than loose ones.

[identity profile] syredronning.livejournal.com 2004-06-19 11:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Great, interesting analysis :))) Thanks for the work you put into it!

[identity profile] cimness.livejournal.com 2004-06-20 06:58 am (UTC)(link)
::curtsey::

[identity profile] elfiepike.livejournal.com 2004-06-20 02:57 am (UTC)(link)
a) all your analysis of art makes me want to go to a museum again, see what my eye actually does with the shapes and sizes and proportions that physical, as opposed to digital, art uses.

b) childsploitation my ass. he's, what, fourteen? fourteen year old boys are all about blooming sexuality and all that jazz, like you said only in completely different words. it's actually really starting to bother me that people are all like, "wow, stop lusting after babies," when it comes to harry potter. i probably don't hang out in fandom enough to see what's really going on, but i think maybe people are taking it too seriously. i don't know, it's late, but really. i'll read underage stuff because i know a lot of people where that was their experience, the first time they had sex they were under eighteen, yanno? anyway, i'll stop now, i think i'm going incoherent. lovely analysis.

[identity profile] cimness.livejournal.com 2004-06-20 06:52 am (UTC)(link)
there are very few people whose first sexual experiences occur after age eighteen, i think. i mean, first SEX, sure, but what about first making out, first groping?

i love art museums ♥.

my momma the art teacher possessed me i think >.>;.

[identity profile] penm.livejournal.com 2004-06-20 11:20 am (UTC)(link)
I have so much to say, and no way to say it without sounding like an idiot. I will, however, say this:

You rock. Hard. <3.

[identity profile] cimness.livejournal.com 2004-06-20 01:08 pm (UTC)(link)
hahahah. you've left me with little idea of what you wanted to say. was it an art criticismy thing or a fandomy thing?

[identity profile] penm.livejournal.com 2004-06-21 12:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Both. Mostly keyboard-mashing along the lines of: LIUDILYQ(*P@!^#$GIUADLhAS. And so on.

You rock like a mad -- no, like two mad rocking things. And really, the circles drawn around Dan Radcliffe's crotch is just. Marvellous. Makes it look like he's got a ... a snowman and the arrow just takes the cake.

[identity profile] cimness.livejournal.com 2004-06-22 01:42 pm (UTC)(link)
a snowman!!!!!!!!!!

ahahah i think you're right. oops. i wasn't thinking about that.

[identity profile] bookshop.livejournal.com 2004-06-22 07:33 am (UTC)(link)
You, I love.

This was *exactly* my point, throughout the entire thread, if people had stopped wanking around me long enough to listen. Thanks for this; it's much appreciated. :)

[identity profile] cimness.livejournal.com 2004-06-22 01:44 pm (UTC)(link)
your point seemed so elementally clear to me that it was difficult at first to accept that people really didn't GET it, as opposed to just trying to be quarrelsome.

hell... maybe they WERE just trying to be quarrelsome.

[identity profile] bookshop.livejournal.com 2004-06-22 01:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, honestly, you'll notice I didn't respond on that thread to anyone else but Olivia and Tara. All the other people who were making it sound like I was attacking Tara actually all really hate me, and since this is the first controversial opinion I've voiced since October, they all literally jumped on the opportunity to criticize me. It was never a real discussion, despite the fact that Tara and I both kept it polite--it was pathetic attempt at a gangbang.

[identity profile] cimness.livejournal.com 2004-06-22 02:02 pm (UTC)(link)
yeah, that was clear, although i wasn't POSITIVE that they were all known enemies. i didn't even read the whole thing. it didn't take very long to get the drift. i thought even olivia--i think it was her?--was rather... condescending might be the word i want. but that might be my defensive tendency to go 'you're not treating me like a grownup!'--leftover from being an intelligent child who jumped into adult conversations and got very sick of being talked down to. i doubt i'll ever get over it.