sex scenes

[cimorene]

sometimes it's easy to write good sex and sometimes it's hard. the first night's sex in my story is graphic and porny and hot, and the later stuff--skims over important bits with metaphors and talking about feelings because it's afraid to bore itself or the reader with repetitiveness or get too embarrassingly self-absorbed.

but why? where did the good, unashamedly porny sex go? i can't let this story out into the public domain until it's at least evened up a bit.

edit. well, um, there it was. heh.

Comments

[schonste.livejournal.com]

Good, get all that hardcore action in there. Metaphorical pr0n is so much less satisfying. XD