new prince of tennis fic: "the case of the missing phonecall, or: favourable outcome", tezuryo, pg

[cimorene]

the case of the missing phonecall, or: favourable outcome (≈12 300 words)
by cimorene
prince of tennis
tezuka/ryoma, pg
thanks to bookshop for the title and the original idea, as well as the beta.

in which tezuka and inui form a truce, ryoma shares tezuka's preference for mysteries over gothic romances, and tezuka keeps giving ryoma his phone number.

Comments

[ought.livejournal.com]

Aja: I feel you should review cim's fic. SHE HAS NO REVIEWS YET.
me:
me: I'm incapable of reviewing fics
Aja:
Aja: not even for me?
me: yes
Aja: yes, even for me?
me: dakfljfdal
me: yes, not even for you
Aja:
Aja:
Aja: !!!!!!!!!!!
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me:
me: you could write the review and post it as me
Aja:
Aja: will it be a favorable review?
me: will it?
Aja: YOU SAID YOU LIKED IT
me: kaldjflkafdljadfkljadf
me: YES I DID
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Hello! I liked this fic. I really liked Inui. I liked that Tezuka didn't like Wuthering Heights! I also liked when Ryoma called Tezuka back to kiss him.

(Aja: ME TOO.)

Also, thumbs up for Tezuka beating Ryoma. I also liked the bit about Ryoma translating the mystery to Momo and Kaidoh. And I liked Inui hanging up on Tezuka. I liked Tezuka carrying his phone everywhere waiting for Ryoma's call. I also liked Karupin meowing at Tezuka. Aja says Tezuka is melodramatic and beautiful , but I think he is just a dork.

In conclusion, this was very well done and I liked it a lot.

I am done with my review now. Goodbye!

[cimness.livejournal.com]

hi, orphne! this is a GREAT review. you should let aja compile reviews for you more often. also, tezuka is totally a dork.