new prince of tennis fic: "the case of the missing phonecall, or: favourable outcome", tezuryo, pg

[cimorene]

the case of the missing phonecall, or: favourable outcome (≈12 300 words)
by cimorene
prince of tennis
tezuka/ryoma, pg
thanks to bookshop for the title and the original idea, as well as the beta.

in which tezuka and inui form a truce, ryoma shares tezuka's preference for mysteries over gothic romances, and tezuka keeps giving ryoma his phone number.

Comments

[kessie.livejournal.com]

YES. *_____________________*

[bookshop.livejournal.com]

GOD. I LOVE THIS FIC SO MUCH. I'M SO HAPPY IT'S UP. YESSSSSSS.

[cimness.livejournal.com]

NOW WRITE THAT PORN.

[cimness.livejournal.com]

ksjöfkfdajösdk ♥

[kessie.livejournal.com]

I CAN'T DO BOTH AT THE SAME TIME. *DITHERS*

I CLEARLY NEED A P.A.

[cimness.livejournal.com]

asölkdfö. well, i can't tell you to write instead of reading because that's not really fair. but just. don't stop being drunk before your ability to write smut wears off!

hey, i wonder if that would work for me...

[lynnmonster.livejournal.com]

Beautiful! Beautiful, gorgeous, thrilling, and lovely! (And did I mention EEEEEEEEEEEEEE?!?)

I was blissing out all the way through!

[ought.livejournal.com]

Aja: I feel you should review cim's fic. SHE HAS NO REVIEWS YET.
me:
me: I'm incapable of reviewing fics
Aja:
Aja: not even for me?
me: yes
Aja: yes, even for me?
me: dakfljfdal
me: yes, not even for you
Aja:
Aja:
Aja: !!!!!!!!!!!
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me:
me: you could write the review and post it as me
Aja:
Aja: will it be a favorable review?
me: will it?
Aja: YOU SAID YOU LIKED IT
me: kaldjflkafdljadfkljadf
me: YES I DID
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Hello! I liked this fic. I really liked Inui. I liked that Tezuka didn't like Wuthering Heights! I also liked when Ryoma called Tezuka back to kiss him.

(Aja: ME TOO.)

Also, thumbs up for Tezuka beating Ryoma. I also liked the bit about Ryoma translating the mystery to Momo and Kaidoh. And I liked Inui hanging up on Tezuka. I liked Tezuka carrying his phone everywhere waiting for Ryoma's call. I also liked Karupin meowing at Tezuka. Aja says Tezuka is melodramatic and beautiful , but I think he is just a dork.

In conclusion, this was very well done and I liked it a lot.

I am done with my review now. Goodbye!

[sparklespiff.livejournal.com]

Oh. My. Goodness. I am so very blown away and am resisting the urge to quote your entire fic at you, because that was love.

Oh, TezuRyo. ♥

Oh, Tezuka, with the slips of paper, and Ryoma, so much with the adoration, and and and.

♥

And it's not just them; all of the other characters are fantastic, too, Fuji with the pepper and the incest in the Gothic romances, perhaps I am reading too much into it, but oh, and the InuKai, and Tezuka not hanging up on Inui ♥ So much stuff I loved in this fic. So much.

But especially this

He took that game, and the next, and then Echizen abandoned his Zone to force Tezuka into tiebreak, and by the time he won Tezuka could hardly breathe from the heat and pressure of seeing and feeling his tennis and Echizen's tennis mated so organically on the court. He knew they could never have played like this at the school or the public courts.

Because their tennis is intimate like that, and you captured it so perfectly and... thank you for writing this, yes, thank you so very much. ♥ ♥

[takewing.livejournal.com]

Oh my god. So good. I don't know what else to say but I am about ten times happier after having read this than I was before. I will point out that my favourite part was probably cuddling while doing homework, though (omgggg the cute). And it amazes me that I felt that knot in my chest, just like Tezuka, at the same bloody times Tezuka did, and it felt just like you described it, and...

That's gotta be some pretty powerful stuff, there. And it was.

Oh! And I loved Ryoma's variation of the Zone - it fits him perfectly and guh. *__*

Love, love, love. ♥

[ego-elite.livejournal.com]

OMG I love this story. I don't know what to say. You and several other Tezuka/Ryoma writers make me love this pairing more and more. ^_____________________^ This smile couldn't be any wider. And sorry for lack of review. XD

[sodamnquirky.livejournal.com]

*heart flutters*

i loved this.

♥ ♥ ♥

[qem_chibati]

I just wanted to say that I really quite enjoyed this. Was sent here via bookshop

I liked the way that Tezuka and Inui organsied a truce, the way that he felt that it would be against the terms of the truce to hang up, at least, straight away.

It was fun seeing the books, Fuji popping up and Ryouma's grin at the end.

THough I have to wonder, what did he do with all those bookmarks. *g*

[kessie.livejournal.com]

Reread this again this morning. :((

*sighs*

You make them such boys. and. and. and.

*flails* gah.

[fluttering.livejournal.com]

Damn. That was perfect.

*tries to catch her breath unsuccessfully*

[pixxers.livejournal.com]

I really love it when my friends post really long stories. Sure, it makes me unproductive and I appear worthless and distracted, but...who cares?

I really love the way you write Tezuka/Ryoma. All your characterizations are so, so good and you always seem to capture some little feeling, especially in scenes that are not intended to be monumental ones. I really enjoy your writing. *hugs*

I liked the easy pace of this story and how sweet they both are. ♥ So good.

[die-gute-seite.livejournal.com]

This is all kinds of awesome, oh my god! I loved that you used Inui to get them together in the first place, I loved the Wuthering Heights bits, I loved Tezuka writing on Ryoma's arm (Gods...♥), but most of all I loved THIS:

"Buchou," he said. He always lingered on the title, as if to leave space around it for the unspoken remainder of a sentence Tezuka could never fully understand.

and THIS:

the way he said "buchou" as if it were a mark of familiarity, like Tezuka's first name, instead of a title.

That's so perfect! I've been smiling ever since I read this fic, thank you! ♥

[nuhiep.livejournal.com]

Excellent. A singularly satisfying read. I admire that you were able to so effortlessly make both Ryoma and Tezuka believable characters. Tezuka especially, since he is the narrator, has this matter-of-fact-ness to him that really moves the story along. He does everything with such an easy confidence that even when he's being a complete, lovestruck dork, it probably doesn't occur to him that there's an easier way to go about wooing Echizen. He makes being a spazz look dignified. It's very refreshing to read a Tezuka whose restraint is not a monumental crisis, but merely a personality trait. Also, one who is not the source of his own kabuki-esque postmodern tragedy. ^_^

That Echizen NEVER looked at the bookmarks was . . . well, it was very Echizen. Dorks in love. <3

[arclaud.livejournal.com]

Oh, this was so lovely! So much fluff, but also a lot of depth of emotion. I love how you write Tezuka. He is very srict, with high expectation, and so in love, which makes him so canon. This is the way Tezuka would have a crush on Ryoma, and gah, you killed me with all the slits of paper and Tezuka never giving up, sure that it must have been lost and not ignored. And lol at how he wrote it on his arm SO YOU WON'T LOSE IT, oh Tezuka. Gah, and Ryoma cuddling and forcing Tezuka to put his arm around him... you can just feel all that chemistry between them. They are such t00bs in love.

But the best part has to be the matches. I love it when writers keep the tennis theme because in TezuRyo it just can't be ignored. And you did it so well too, the way they know each other better through tennis, how they spend time together in the court. I don't think someone like Tezuka or Ryoma could get to know someone any other way. I love Inui too, I just love how he pesters Tezuka. And then he gives him the math book. Oh, Inui!

Funniest scene: Kikumaru worrying over murders and Fuji appearing out of nowhere. How I love thee!

You make me love this pairing. Thank you!

[happiestwhen.livejournal.com]

There was a little pause. Then, "Buchou." Echizen's voice was low, but with the phone right next to Tezuka's ear he made it out easily. "Can you come back?" he asked in a rush.

This made my heart swell so much.

[soundczech.livejournal.com]

This makes me jealous, as a writer. I wish I wrote it :( THE SCENE WHERE TEZUKA WROTE HIS NUMBER ON ECHIZEN'S ARM WAS SO HOT.

[cimness.livejournal.com]

lökasjföasjfdö. thank you! i spent like half an hour today trying to figure out why they are extra boyish here. a pleasant way to pass the time! :)

[cimness.livejournal.com]

thank you! :)

[cimness.livejournal.com]

hi, orphne! this is a GREAT review. you should let aja compile reviews for you more often. also, tezuka is totally a dork.

[cimness.livejournal.com]

um... hi! i suck at responding to really flattering reviews. but this made me smile a lot and i appreciated all your comments ♥♥ and aölkjfdaösj about the tennis, because, thank you. i hate writing tennis because i have no idea what i'm doing, but i realised i needed to run with the whole tennis=sex thing there at the end.

as for the incest in gothic romances, that was just tezuka's personal comment on wuthering heights. i suppose it's one of many gothic tropes, but i don't think it's a defining feature of the genre. :)