new prince of tennis fic: "the case of the missing phonecall, or: favourable outcome", tezuryo, pg

[cimorene]

the case of the missing phonecall, or: favourable outcome (≈12 300 words)
by cimorene
prince of tennis
tezuka/ryoma, pg
thanks to bookshop for the title and the original idea, as well as the beta.

in which tezuka and inui form a truce, ryoma shares tezuka's preference for mysteries over gothic romances, and tezuka keeps giving ryoma his phone number.

Comments

[pixxers.livejournal.com]

I really love it when my friends post really long stories. Sure, it makes me unproductive and I appear worthless and distracted, but...who cares?

I really love the way you write Tezuka/Ryoma. All your characterizations are so, so good and you always seem to capture some little feeling, especially in scenes that are not intended to be monumental ones. I really enjoy your writing. *hugs*

I liked the easy pace of this story and how sweet they both are. ♥ So good.

[cimness.livejournal.com]

:) thank you! i know how you feel. i always feel inadequate in comparison when other people are productive. but in a good way! i'm glad you like this story at its scary length, too, since it is totally the reason i did not have fic for you in time for your birthday. :X

i appreciate your comments about characterisation - of course i think about it a lot, but it's always nice to have my opinions reinforced from outside. :)