cimorene: cartoony drawing of a woman's head in profile giving dubious side-eye (kinky!)
Cimorene ([personal profile] cimorene) wrote2007-01-16 11:36 pm

more possessive than public fellatio?

"We need to do something more possessive."
 
Bodie smiled to himself, he just bet Ray didn't even hear himself. "More possessive than public fellatio?"


this story is so bad that i remember it even though the last time i read it must've been three years ago at a minimum - to the point that incidental character names at the beginning looked famiilar.

also i'm totally going to work that into a conversation sometime. "more possessive than public fellatio?"
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[identity profile] kyuuketsukirui.livejournal.com 2007-01-17 06:14 am (UTC)(link)
WHAT.

First of all, score one for completely unnatural dialogue. Who says "we need to do something more possessive"? Second, how are public blowjobs possessive?

[identity profile] cimness.livejournal.com 2007-01-17 12:05 pm (UTC)(link)
i guess if you're living in a world where having sex with someone automatically implies possessive feelings...?