more possessive than public fellatio?

[cimorene]

"We need to do something more possessive."
 
Bodie smiled to himself, he just bet Ray didn't even hear himself. "More possessive than public fellatio?"

this story is so bad that i remember it even though the last time i read it must've been three years ago at a minimum - to the point that incidental character names at the beginning looked famiilar.

also i'm totally going to work that into a conversation sometime. "more possessive than public fellatio?"

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[kyuuketsukirui.livejournal.com]

WHAT.

First of all, score one for completely unnatural dialogue. Who says "we need to do something more possessive"? Second, how are public blowjobs possessive?

[cimness.livejournal.com]

i guess if you're living in a world where having sex with someone automatically implies possessive feelings...?