new bandslash fic: fantasy book

[cimorene]

Fantasy Book (≈16 400 words)
Bandslash: My Chemical Romance, Frank/Gerard
NC-17. A pon farr story, which is to say, someone's in heat and insane with horniness, which is to say, lots of explicit sex.
Beta by wax_jism.

This was really, really not normal behavior for Gerard - not for real, normal Gerard, and it was even a little abrupt for the imaginary Gerard who lived in Frank's head and came out during his Special Alone Times with his dick.

Links to this post, please, and not to my webspace.

Comments

[ubixtiz.livejournal.com]

You know, I think that is the sweetest darned fuck-or-die fic I've ever read. Very hot and I love how they're cranky and snarky and friendly and frustrated and filthy all through, and then the ending is all warm fuzzies and fluffy happy awww. Hot like burning, and all wrapped up in them just being adorable dorky gross boys who love each other and so, so sweet. ♥

[eleanor-lavish.livejournal.com]

Holy mary mother of GOD, that was so hot. I can't. I just. And then the end was deliciously sweet and real and romantic, and oh, god, yes. (Really, I am honestly usually much, much better at feedback than this, please forgive me, my brain is still not really working right.) *saves forever and ever*

[wildestranger.livejournal.com]

Wonderful. Your earnest-and-needy Gerard is most delightful. :)

[marcolette.livejournal.com]

I may have squealed aloud and scared my cats when I saw the summary of this story show up on my flist, and the story itself more than lived up to my hopes. Very hot, with just the right touch of angst to make it emotionally satisfying as well. I love both your guys.

[katesnotes.livejournal.com]

I loved this, it is unbelievably hot as well as clever, sweet and humourous. I strongly suspect I will be reading it many more times in the future. Just wonderful.

[shoemaster.livejournal.com]

I don't want to go into too much detail of how much I loved this because, well, you don't actually want to know. But seriously, the dubcon part managed to be extremely not creepy, and the extremely hot sex was interspersed with humor, which I love and yeah. Did I mention really hot?

[airgiodslv.livejournal.com]

That was fantastic. I can't believe you made a story with that much unrelenting *sex* in it so endlessly interesting. Your characters were real and adorable and ridiculous and perfect, and I could hear them both, especially Frank's voice, the whole way through. Brilliant scenario, one that could have gone totally wrong and instead turned out amazingly right. I just...I love their stupid faces. Thanks for putting a huge smile on mine. :-)

[mod-journal.livejournal.com]

*drools* OMG so hot and dirty and funny. I love demandingsnarky! Gerard and Frank ... believing he's lucked out. *G*

And the end ... sweet.

[battleofhydaspe.livejournal.com]

Too good for its own good. Don't expect me to be more coherent here.

[janet-carter.livejournal.com]

Oh, god, yes, that was awesome.

[turloughishere.livejournal.com]

*flails incoherently* What an absolutely fabulous story!!! I'm always wary of this scenario because it can be so cringeworthy but you've managed to make it fun and hot and messy and snarky and terribly sweet! And I absolutely love your Frank voice!! You're a fabulous writer, you really are!

[vass]

I think it's the geekiness that makes me happiest, but I can't decide for sure, there's so much else to be happy about.

[jezrana.livejournal.com]

Nnnnrgh. Probably the hottest porn I've ever read, and the two of them being funny and sweet and geeky and silly and just them holds it together.

[theswearingkind.livejournal.com]

GAH!

oh my God, i'm SO not a frank/gerard girl (blasphemy, i know), but i HAD to read this, because fuck-or-die is one of my favorite, favorite kinks, and i am SO GLAD that i did, because it was hot and funny and sweet and hot and in-character and did i mention HOT, and i'm flailing at you like a mad flaily thing, but this is all basically just to say YES. A++++++++++++++.

[greenjelloforst.livejournal.com]

so i haven't flailed in the longest time, but this, this right here? was so flail-worthy that i had to comment on it. :)

when i saw the word count (16000 words worth of sex, jesus) i wasn't sure about it, because i dont think any sex scene over, like, 7000, has kept my attention. then i saw the summary and oh, yeah, remembered why i love your fic. the humor, the realistic dialogue that always, always has me hearing Frank and Gerard in my head, kept me sitting here for the past half hour, foregoing sleep to read this through. the insane amounts of very-very-hot-yet-still-sweet (and dorky, because, hey, it's Frank and Gerard) of course helped too.

[someblazingstar.livejournal.com]

Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn.

The thing that made this extra super awesome (besides the hot, oh, the incredible hot) was the realness of it. Um, you know, for a story about all-night, relentless pon farr sexin'. But their actions and reactions and voices made it seem real, even with the contrived plot device. (Which I don't mean in a bad way, since I already mentioned that fuck-or-die is pretty much my favourite smut cliche of all time.) I've reread this fic 3 times already, Jesus, and it just continues being hot and cute and funny and sweet and perfect. Dang.

And "Star Trek? That's all you've got?" FTW.

[d-copper.livejournal.com]

So sweet. The ending is just so...them! Seriously, this is the 100% personalised fuck or die cliche story for Frank and Gerard, and this is me complimenting you heaps because it is just so very well written.

The sex is very hot and well plotted, but it is the characterisation that I love the most.

[nimmy.livejournal.com]

wonderful, but then I knew it would be

I ended up feeling really sorry for them but stupidly happy when Gerard admitted to crushing on Frank too

[erilyn.livejournal.com]

This is just incredible. So hot, while being sweet and funny and geeky and awkward :)

[uinuva.livejournal.com]

oh hai. I don't really have any words after reading that. I just loved how they were and just -- you make them sound so real, somehow.
Amazing.

[fayemeadows.livejournal.com]

Oh my jesus. That was insanely hot. :D

And, um, I'm going to friend you if you don't mind.

[tempore.livejournal.com]

Damn. Like, just. Memories, definitely. Because I loved the part where they're kind of frustrated and it's not all perfect sex in perfect positions throughout.

[glorify.livejournal.com]

I seriously read this fic all the time.

[turps33.livejournal.com]

This was so fantastic!

Gerard/Frank and Trek and fuck or die all tied up in one damn hot story. I may flail myself off the ground with glee.

[locked-knees.livejournal.com]

i love it.
memories.
ungh.
cavemanish.