new bandslash fic: fantasy book

[cimorene]

Fantasy Book (≈16 400 words)
Bandslash: My Chemical Romance, Frank/Gerard
NC-17. A pon farr story, which is to say, someone's in heat and insane with horniness, which is to say, lots of explicit sex.
Beta by wax_jism.

This was really, really not normal behavior for Gerard - not for real, normal Gerard, and it was even a little abrupt for the imaginary Gerard who lived in Frank's head and came out during his Special Alone Times with his dick.

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Comments

[ubixtiz.livejournal.com]

You know, I think that is the sweetest darned fuck-or-die fic I've ever read. Very hot and I love how they're cranky and snarky and friendly and frustrated and filthy all through, and then the ending is all warm fuzzies and fluffy happy awww. Hot like burning, and all wrapped up in them just being adorable dorky gross boys who love each other and so, so sweet. ♥

[cimness.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm glad to hear it! I have personally read some that were more full of melodrama as well as of epic romance, but this one doesn't really fit the melodrama genre since of course, Gerard won't actually die. He'd just be really, really uncomfortable.

[eleanor-lavish.livejournal.com]

Holy mary mother of GOD, that was so hot. I can't. I just. And then the end was deliciously sweet and real and romantic, and oh, god, yes. (Really, I am honestly usually much, much better at feedback than this, please forgive me, my brain is still not really working right.) *saves forever and ever*

[cimness.livejournal.com]

Ahahah. Thanks! It was kind of a lot of smut, so I'm glad it kept working for you and didn't get boring.

[wildestranger.livejournal.com]

Wonderful. Your earnest-and-needy Gerard is most delightful. :)

[cimness.livejournal.com]

Thanks!

[marcolette.livejournal.com]

I may have squealed aloud and scared my cats when I saw the summary of this story show up on my flist, and the story itself more than lived up to my hopes. Very hot, with just the right touch of angst to make it emotionally satisfying as well. I love both your guys.

[cimness.livejournal.com]

Awww. I hope the cats recovered! And thank you very much for the compliments.

[katesnotes.livejournal.com]

I loved this, it is unbelievably hot as well as clever, sweet and humourous. I strongly suspect I will be reading it many more times in the future. Just wonderful.

[cimness.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it that much.

[shoemaster.livejournal.com]

I don't want to go into too much detail of how much I loved this because, well, you don't actually want to know. But seriously, the dubcon part managed to be extremely not creepy, and the extremely hot sex was interspersed with humor, which I love and yeah. Did I mention really hot?

[cimness.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm glad the humour worked for you - that was, like, my solution to how to keep the sex from getting too boring. And, you know, glad the sex worked for you too.

[airgiodslv.livejournal.com]

That was fantastic. I can't believe you made a story with that much unrelenting *sex* in it so endlessly interesting. Your characters were real and adorable and ridiculous and perfect, and I could hear them both, especially Frank's voice, the whole way through. Brilliant scenario, one that could have gone totally wrong and instead turned out amazingly right. I just...I love their stupid faces. Thanks for putting a huge smile on mine. :-)

[cimness.livejournal.com]

Hee. It's interesting you say that, because I almost didn't write this idea - I kept it around, not intending to write it, for a long time - because I couldn't see how so much unrelieved sex could avoid being boring, but I couldn't see a fade to black making sense. I hit on the wtf? (and hopefully humour) in Frank's POV to tie it together, and that made me willing to tackle it, which is good, because I always have a) loved pon farr stories and b) found them kind of ridiculously funny.

[mod-journal.livejournal.com]

*drools* OMG so hot and dirty and funny. I love demandingsnarky! Gerard and Frank ... believing he's lucked out. *G*

And the end ... sweet.

[cimness.livejournal.com]

Thanks!

[battleofhydaspe.livejournal.com]

Too good for its own good. Don't expect me to be more coherent here.

[cimness.livejournal.com]

Heee, no worries. Thanks for the comment!

[janet-carter.livejournal.com]

Oh, god, yes, that was awesome.

[cimness.livejournal.com]

Heh. Thank you!

[turloughishere.livejournal.com]

*flails incoherently* What an absolutely fabulous story!!! I'm always wary of this scenario because it can be so cringeworthy but you've managed to make it fun and hot and messy and snarky and terribly sweet! And I absolutely love your Frank voice!! You're a fabulous writer, you really are!

[cimness.livejournal.com]

Thanks!

[vass]

I think it's the geekiness that makes me happiest, but I can't decide for sure, there's so much else to be happy about.

[cimness.livejournal.com]

Hahhahaha. I feel so old when people talk about the cliché without apparently even being aware of the Star Trek part, dammit. I have so much glee that Gerard likes TOS.

[jezrana.livejournal.com]

Nnnnrgh. Probably the hottest porn I've ever read, and the two of them being funny and sweet and geeky and silly and just them holds it together.

[cimness.livejournal.com]

Heh. Thank you!

[theswearingkind.livejournal.com]

GAH!

oh my God, i'm SO not a frank/gerard girl (blasphemy, i know), but i HAD to read this, because fuck-or-die is one of my favorite, favorite kinks, and i am SO GLAD that i did, because it was hot and funny and sweet and hot and in-character and did i mention HOT, and i'm flailing at you like a mad flaily thing, but this is all basically just to say YES. A++++++++++++++.

[cimness.livejournal.com]

Hahhahah. It's not blasphemy, per se, it just means you're an alien creature whose brain works in mysterious and unfathomable ways. I'm glad you didn't regret overcoming your reluctance even if Gerard wasn't in any danger of death, per se.

[greenjelloforst.livejournal.com]

so i haven't flailed in the longest time, but this, this right here? was so flail-worthy that i had to comment on it. :)

when i saw the word count (16000 words worth of sex, jesus) i wasn't sure about it, because i dont think any sex scene over, like, 7000, has kept my attention. then i saw the summary and oh, yeah, remembered why i love your fic. the humor, the realistic dialogue that always, always has me hearing Frank and Gerard in my head, kept me sitting here for the past half hour, foregoing sleep to read this through. the insane amounts of very-very-hot-yet-still-sweet (and dorky, because, hey, it's Frank and Gerard) of course helped too.

[cimness.livejournal.com]

Yeah, I usually get bored really quickly and skim past sex scenes, actually, which is why I nearly didn't write this story when I got the idea. I picked Frank's POV to take the focus off the porn and keep some humour in it, and I'm fairly satisfied with how it turned out (even if writing that much smut was still kind of boring). And thank you for the compliments!

[someblazingstar.livejournal.com]

Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn.

The thing that made this extra super awesome (besides the hot, oh, the incredible hot) was the realness of it. Um, you know, for a story about all-night, relentless pon farr sexin'. But their actions and reactions and voices made it seem real, even with the contrived plot device. (Which I don't mean in a bad way, since I already mentioned that fuck-or-die is pretty much my favourite smut cliche of all time.) I've reread this fic 3 times already, Jesus, and it just continues being hot and cute and funny and sweet and perfect. Dang.

And "Star Trek? That's all you've got?" FTW.

[someblazingstar.livejournal.com]

Oh, and Fantasy Special Alone Times Gerard - hee!

[d-copper.livejournal.com]

So sweet. The ending is just so...them! Seriously, this is the 100% personalised fuck or die cliche story for Frank and Gerard, and this is me complimenting you heaps because it is just so very well written.

The sex is very hot and well plotted, but it is the characterisation that I love the most.

[cimness.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[nimmy.livejournal.com]

wonderful, but then I knew it would be

I ended up feeling really sorry for them but stupidly happy when Gerard admitted to crushing on Frank too

[cimness.livejournal.com]

Well, that's good! You shared your emotions with Frank. Nobody wants unrequited love after a night of drugged sex!

[erilyn.livejournal.com]

This is just incredible. So hot, while being sweet and funny and geeky and awkward :)

[cimness.livejournal.com]

Thank you! Glad you liked it.

[uinuva.livejournal.com]

oh hai. I don't really have any words after reading that. I just loved how they were and just -- you make them sound so real, somehow.
Amazing.

[cimness.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[fayemeadows.livejournal.com]

Oh my jesus. That was insanely hot. :D

And, um, I'm going to friend you if you don't mind.

[cimness.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. And feel free!

[tempore.livejournal.com]

Damn. Like, just. Memories, definitely. Because I loved the part where they're kind of frustrated and it's not all perfect sex in perfect positions throughout.

[cimness.livejournal.com]

Thanks!

[glorify.livejournal.com]

I seriously read this fic all the time.

[cimness.livejournal.com]

Thanks! That's nice to hear. I'm glad you like it.

[turps33.livejournal.com]

This was so fantastic!

Gerard/Frank and Trek and fuck or die all tied up in one damn hot story. I may flail myself off the ground with glee.

[cimness.livejournal.com]

Thanks! Glad you liked it.

[locked-knees.livejournal.com]

i love it.
memories.
ungh.
cavemanish.