new bandslash fic: fantasy book

[cimorene]

Fantasy Book (≈16 400 words)
Bandslash: My Chemical Romance, Frank/Gerard
NC-17. A pon farr story, which is to say, someone's in heat and insane with horniness, which is to say, lots of explicit sex.
Beta by wax_jism.

This was really, really not normal behavior for Gerard - not for real, normal Gerard, and it was even a little abrupt for the imaginary Gerard who lived in Frank's head and came out during his Special Alone Times with his dick.

Links to this post, please, and not to my webspace.

Comments

[dreamyraynbo.livejournal.com]

That may just be the most interesting sexpollen fic I've ever read. The sex wasn't perfect, by any means, the personalities of Frank and Gerard came out so clearly in every scene, and you actually had the characters deal with the consequences in a spot-on awkward conversation that had me rolling my eyes and them and grinning like mad by the end. Seriously, the dialogue? Amazingly realistic. And so much fucking sex, but you kept it from being redundant to the reader, while still getting the point across that, yeah, these guys are fucking tired.

Anyway, I'm definitely going to have to hunt down more of your stories.

[cimness.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it and that what I was trying to do worked for you. I was a little intimidated when I got this idea by the amount of sex that I'd have to write for the humour to come across as I envisioned, but surprisingly enough I was pretty pleased in the end. And I'm ecstatic when readers respond the way I was hoping. :)

[blueflame17528.livejournal.com]

LOL fuck or die. Awesome options...
I loved Frank's voice, you did an awesome job of it...
I just can't seem to get the right words out...

probably the best mind-porn I've ever read, though. So, so much sex....

Excellente!

[kita0610.livejournal.com]

Nghhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

I tried for ten minutes to come up with feedback that's actually in English. Sorry.

[cimness.livejournal.com]

Hahahahha XD

[blindmouse.livejournal.com]

This is fantastic :-) Seriously, you managed to keep me enthralled through an entire novelette of porn for a pairing I find awesome but not sexy; lots of kudos.

[cimness.livejournal.com]

Ahahhaha. Thanks! Typically I find that amount of porn boring, too, so when I got this idea I almost didn't write it. Trying to make porn funny was quite odd!

[panictowel.livejournal.com]

- "Gnuh?" said Frank
Gerard said apologetically, "I know,"

- Now what? "Could you please let go of my balls?" said Frank. First things first.
omfg ;-D haha

- ”…while Gerard was apparently dying of some kind of alien sex disease or something.

- ...and it was also the second and third sexiest thing and Frank was screwed.
hehe, like seriously – you made me laugh so much inbetween… god. made my night.


alright, fuck it, I can’t stop reading all the time just to remember all the lines that were made of awesomness. let’s just say – this thing is such a piece of genius and it so made my night!!!!!

Okay, just one more line:
- "Wanna go again? - Sure, Gee, go ahead,"
omfg ;-D


okay, you definitely have a gift with sex scenes ;-) no, the whole thing is so bloody great – and when they were making love – not fucking – when it was pure soul and not romantic and stuff, just you describing the best of best feelings frank felt – seriously, girl, you have a gift with words.
this story is so awesome. more than that.
thanks a lot for posting, you're my hero ;-)

[cimness.livejournal.com]

Heee. Thanks for taking the time to find your favourite quotes - it's always fun to read those!

[valencianbelle.livejournal.com]

This looked like it was going to be good. It's just you used, 'like' way too much. It was annoying. Like, you can't, like use, like, like, every other, like, word, like, because, like, it's like, annoying, like.