new prince of tennis fic: "spirit house", tezuryo, pg

[cimorene]

this is the sequel to my spin-the-bottle fic, playing for keeps.

spirit house (≈3000 words)
by cimorene
prince of tennis
tezuka/ryoma, pg
thanks to bookshop for beta and title. ♥

Through the loose fabric of his shirt Tezuka feels the bumps of bone, the heat of his skin, the curve of his spine creating a small hollow, a void under his palm which shows Tezuka exactly where to put his hand. For some reason he has never thought about this - the perfect shape of Echizen's back. He knows he will never forget it now.

Comments

[kessie.livejournal.com]

*cries*

I will never get tired of reading this. Oh.

[storyteller.livejournal.com]

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oh my god that was so beautiful. And hot. And lovely. And perfect.

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

[penm.livejournal.com]

Dude. Cim. I love it.

I wish I had real constructive things to say but I don't. Just. Love. ♥.

[snowmage14.livejournal.com]

OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!! I can't say enough just how powerful this story is. I love it, keep writing please :)

[fluttering.livejournal.com]

That was brilliant. Both parts were just amazing. You've captured Ryoma and Tezuka so perfectly... and your descriptions, the shrine, everything was right and exactly how it would go.

Lovely. Absolutely lovely.

[weirdlyyours.livejournal.com]

Oh. This was beautiful and lovely and guhh. The descriptions are breathtaking and wonderful. ♥

[ego-elite.livejournal.com]

This story just took my breath away. From the Description of a simple touch that's more then simple. To the use of symbolism. I love that they hardly talk to one another yet everything left unsaid is still understood.

[shushesyou.livejournal.com]

Oh, oh. I'm speechless. This was gorgeous. I loved playing for keeps too, and this was just amazing. I loved the kiss, but I loved every moment of them together and the dynamic between them was just perfect. ♥

[cimness.livejournal.com]

this is such a nice thing to say. :x all your feedback right after i posted this was really great and lovely. sorry i didn't respond to this sooner. -.-

[cimness.livejournal.com]

thank you (belatedly)! for reading and the feedback. ♥

[cimness.livejournal.com]

thank you anyway! this is more constructive and better than my feedback for your long proper scorching netkissing story. i have become horrible at feedback and at responding to feedback apparently. and i have not seen you around!

[cimness.livejournal.com]

thank you! the feedback means a lot and makes me smile. i seem to have lost the gift of replying to it without sounding stupid, but please know it is appreciated. :)

[cimness.livejournal.com]

öalksjfdöasl thank you! and sorry for taking so long to answer. this is wonderful feedback and it means so much to hear things like that while i am still relatively new to writing this pairing which i have completely fallen in love with. ♥ exactly how it would go is one of the highest compliments i can imagine.

[cimness.livejournal.com]

i'm so sorry for taking so long to answer this but i couldn't just leave it unanswered! thank you for commenting and the compliments. ♥ i'm very glad you enjoyed it.

[cimness.livejournal.com]

oh, thank you for taking the time to comment with such a thoughtful piece of feedback! i'm glad you enjoyed my symbolism and imagery. the incredible wealth of implicit understanding between tezuka and ryoma is definitely one of the biggest attractions of the pairing for me, and i wanted to explore it a little with this story.

[cimness.livejournal.com]

ölkfdaös. i'm so sorry for responding so late to this feedback, so it just looks kind of silly. but thank you ♥! the comment was very pleasing and very very much appreciated. :x i kind of let myself get carried away by my romantic side (or is that tezuka's romantic side?) a little in this story. i'm glad it worked for you. :)

[flosspyromaniac.livejournal.com]

I loved both fics and the spirit house setting and all it means to Tezuka was a nice touch. I love how you've caught then both so well, and the longing that's so clear.
Lovely.

[cimness.livejournal.com]

thank you! ♥!

[musichika-tg.livejournal.com]

Wow...This is amazing! So much stuff here! Overwhelms the senses, kinda.