Do You Eat The Plebefic Headers Last?

[cimorene]

1. Title: Broken Lights in a Brothel Cemetery



2. Summary :“Oh, Patrick, you’re so much fun!” [I don't know what it is about this one that I love so much. The thing is that it's not especially bad - it's not even misspelled or punctuated - but somehow out of context it's just... a bit surrealist.]



3. POV:It is written in a screenplay style. So 3rd?



4. Summary: "Well," Ryan glares at Spencer for mocking him, then looks a little worried when he continues, "I think I’m also maybe a little gay for Brendon…or…like, a lot." Spencer just barely keeps himself from jumping up and screaming, "Oh, really? Because I hadn’t had a clue, with all the longing glances and the blushes and you stealing his underwear and putting it under your pillow" all sarcastic and bitchy-like, because sarcastic and bitchy is what he does best.



5. [Author's notes] This is also kind of a filler chapter 'cause you can't logically get from Florida to South Dakota in one night even with two drivers. [Well, yes - that's true, if you're traveling by car, but - plebethor - have you heard of this thing called a "scene break"?]

Comments

[someblazingstar.livejournal.com]

I have to wonder if a "brothel cemetery" is a place where prostitutes are buried, or if it's a cemetery that also doubles as a brothel. If so, are we talking like hookers who, like, live in a crypt or something, or zombies?

(re your last LJ post, pffft. I own probably around 50 pairs of shoes, so people who make fun of you can suck it. Granted, I have the excuse that I sometimes need to have a good selection for photoshoots, but it's not like I wouldn't have bought them all anyway.)

[cimorene]

There are just SO MANY POSSIBILITIES, right? Zombie hookers? Hookers who work for zombies? Hookers who also happen to be necrophiliacs? Or perhaps just some pimps who set up shop at the cemetery to cater to necrophiliacs? An in-house cemetery at a brothel? A cemetery named after a famous brothel? Maybe it's just a combination brothel and cemetery, sort of like KFC/Taco Bell!

[cesare]

#4 makes me want to give the writer a cookie. It's almost not plebey... well, sort of...

[cimorene]

Hahahhahah! I know exactly what you mean! It's more like she's very young or just new to writing/fandom. I could see myself writing that when I was 18 or so. (That doesn't mean it's not ridiculous, though!)