Header spelunking: Don't worry, it's a really abrupt and unexplained switch, too

[cimorene]

1. [Tags] A Complete Clusterfuck, Like, Good Luck Reading This, If You Understand Any of it You Get Ten Cookies


2. Is it a fic? Yes. Is it a good one? Depends on your standards.


3. Updated: Found the time to finally make paragraph breaks.


4. [Notes:] short chapters coz theyre more poetic????


5. Notes: It's not in second person pov, I promise. I switch it to third within a few paragraphs. No worries, mates. Enjoy~

Comments

[brownbetty]

It was pretty lucky #3 finally got that week off!

[princessofgeeks]

… i got nothin'.

[lotesse]

i appreciate no. 4's postmodern postpunctuation take on the poetics of bewilderment

[starfish]

1. Are Tags Always In Title Case, Or Is This A Special Effort?
2. I'm guessing that's a NO, then.
3. Perhaps I'll find the time to read it. But that's unlikely.
4. No. No, theyre not....
5. And yet, I am worried. ~

[krait]

Haha, #2 has my reluctant approval, because (in contrast to the vast majority of "it's not very good"-type summaries) it's grammatically accurate, not overtly deprecating, and comes across as tongue-in-cheek rather than insecure. :D

#3 is just kind of hilarious. LAST MONTH'S UPDATE: apostrophes! THIS MONTH'S UPDATE: paragraph breaks! NEXT UPDATE: Spellcheck! (tentatively scheduled for 2 months from now; it's harder and I'm a very busy author you know!)

[vass]

I'm glad #2 clarified that it's a fic.

[phosfate]

I would not have known otherwise.

[cimorene]

I know. It's so beautiful, because that approach to formatting or ... punctuation or whatever... it's... so nonsensical, yet it contains a more-or-less coherent internal logic.