more than 100K of singin in the rain-based threesome fic, revised to nc-17 rating, 45-page length, hopefully funny and uplifting. i mean, i can just post without a beta, but it's *awfully* long for that.
i'm looking for an opinion with more distance than mine has. to tell me if you can't follow something, or if i get too mushy, or if the sex doesn't segue well into the rest of the text. y'know.
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Date: 9 Mar 2004 09:22 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 10 Mar 2004 12:11 pm (UTC)i'm looking for an opinion with more distance than mine has. to tell me if you can't follow something, or if i get too mushy, or if the sex doesn't segue well into the rest of the text. y'know.
thanks a mil! <3