batman fps: "anomaly", bruce/gordon, explicit

[cimorene]

Anomaly by cimness
Bruce/Gordon, explicit sex, ≈2700 words
I started this for a prompt at The Batman Kink Meme, but it got too long to post there.

"Batman isn't here right now," he said coolly.

Comments

[irisbleufic.livejournal.com]

Hey, nice. Especially the bit about the bloodied lip. And I'm not just saying that because I write Batman/Joker, either ;)

[cimness.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I'm pretty pleased with the dialogue in this one.

[julesoh.livejournal.com]

This is the kind of fic that makes me realise just why I love this pairing so much! Awesome dialogue, and this part:-

Bruce shrugged. "We'll manage. I'll do the voice."

"But what?" said Jim, sliding off and ambling around the desk to the inviting pathway presented by Bruce's casually splayed legs. "If I take you over to the sofa, you've got a spare pointy-eared hat?"

A faint crease appeared between Bruce's eyebrows. "Cowl."

Just made me smile a lot. You write the two of them really well!

[cimness.livejournal.com]

Hahha, I had a lot of fun with the banter in this one, I admit. I'm glad to hear my take on the characters resonated with you. Thanks for the fb!

[anglepoiselamp.livejournal.com]

"thank God for impatient billionaires who couldn't stop to take your glasses off before humping you into the sofa."


:D :D :D :D

That was a piece of absolute awesomeness. <3

[cimness.livejournal.com]

Thank you! ♥♥

[solaras.livejournal.com]

You may have killed me, with this post. Multiple Bruce/Gordon that are hot as hell....DEAD *_*

[cimness.livejournal.com]

OH GOD NO! DON'T BE DEAD! MY JIM/BRUCE ADDICTION NEEDS YOU! I mean, I'm glad you liked it! :)

[brightbear.livejournal.com]

I really like the depth of your Bruce/Gordon, they both are very real with baggage but fit so well together.

I really can't think of anything more constructive to say...

[cimness.livejournal.com]

Constructive isn't a requirement! I'm glad to know it worked for you. Thanks for the fb!

[sarren.livejournal.com]

Very cool!

[cimness.livejournal.com]

Thanks!

[southpaw526.livejournal.com]

You made my brain essplode. *sulks*

Muhhh, I love your writing. Always have, dearie.

[cimness.livejournal.com]

Thanks. :) I wasn't really trying to explode your brain, but I'll take it as a compliment! ♥

[bohlster.livejournal.com]

Nggh. Stumbled on this via delicious and am very glad to have done so. You evoke some really sexy, clear images and write terrific banter. Thanks for posting.

[cimness.livejournal.com]

Thank you! Glad you liked it. :)