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cimorenehades/persephone. the first two chapters. the first one is going to be HEAVILY revised. um. and they're not actually chapters.
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aeslis and ninglor and fuschia for screwing my head back on straight.
mental note: in order to calm down, think really hard about wax.
who'da thunk? ^.^;
huge hugs and kisses for
aeslis and ninglor and fuschia for screwing my head back on straight.mental note: in order to calm down, think really hard about wax.
who'da thunk? ^.^;
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Re:
Date: 3 Oct 2002 05:39 am (UTC)if you have some comments, they're certainly welcome, but it's sticky cause it's for class--we don't have to turn in revised drafts of most parts and in most cases don't even GET to.
however, i do want to improve it for myself. so mechanical things maybe not so much, general sweepy story arch things maybe more.