what not to read

[cimorene]

Qui-Gon was holding Obi-Wan in his arms as they lay in bed together. His thoughts were on the beautiful creature besides him as he slept. those are the first two sentences. as you can imagine, i didn't read any further.

Comments

[mirabella]

That's a shame, because you missed lines like:

"You were here with us, Force as I gently took his penis into my mouth and brought him pleasure as he had never known. As he cried out my name, pleading for me to help release him in the sweet triumph of pleasure."

Or maybe not a shame, but you know.

[cimness.livejournal.com]

but that one doesn't have wonderful grammatical errors like 'the beautiful creature BESIDES him.'