other than this it's not that good, but...:

[cimorene]

"Besides, I want to help people," Obi-Wan finished lamely.

"You can help people in Agri-Corps," the rogue pointed out reasonably.

"I want to help people," he responded scathingly with all the offended dignity of a thirteen-year-old boy. "I don't want to feed them."

eta: "If I had truly wanted you dead, you would be dead, Obi-Wan," the Master stated.

"You wanted to kill Xanatos and he's still alive," the boy pointed out.

"Everyone has an off day," Qui-Gon replied.

"Or an off decade," Obi-Wan smirked. "How long have you been trying to kill him?"

Qui-Gon Jinn folded his arms across his chest and leveled a stunning glare at the boy. "Do you want me to train you or not?"

Comments

[jennaria.livejournal.com]

Has the spelling been fixed on that story? When it was first posted, it contained several references to the 'rouge' Jedi, which in turn inspired images of Qui-Gon in pancake makeup...

[cimness.livejournal.com]

well, right there it has... i didn't read the whole thing, because, well, it was really bad.