sw story thoughts

[cimorene]

i like trudy west (her ouvre i mean) and i respect this story, alternate, but i'm just not enjoying it. it seems very good, very solemn, in some sense stretching to be truly romantic. but at the same time the symbolism creates a--the schism in obi-wan feels off. a false schism, if you will. i don't know. it seems wrong to me, very wrong. it would be like if deanna had gotten together with thomas riker in the end--just wrong.