'the rough silk of the beard'? well. there's someone who's never spent much time with a beard. yahtzee's generally a good bet for a good read. well put-together, no notable missteps, a strong narrative flow. perhaps she's overconfident, even. i'd say this one might be a little too smooth.
huge emotional hurricane earlier. not over anger at mom, just exhausted it for the present. i think she's really not capable of understanding anyway.
huge emotional hurricane earlier. not over anger at mom, just exhausted it for the present. i think she's really not capable of understanding anyway.