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cimorenea short quotation of lyrics is not an appropriate way to begin a story.
if i were a professor i'd deduct major points for lack of class every single time.
using poetry or prose is only marginally better.
::kicks viciously at stories::
if i were a professor i'd deduct major points for lack of class every single time.
using poetry or prose is only marginally better.
::kicks viciously at stories::
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Date: 22 Nov 2003 09:04 pm (UTC)- Duncan
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Date: 22 Nov 2003 11:27 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 23 Nov 2003 01:42 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 23 Nov 2003 03:32 am (UTC)still, i don't let them get away without points deducted.
that one story i wanted to beat, viciously, with a stick. and stomp on it with sharp shoes. nothing less would satisfy me. not only did it have four lines at the beginning, it had the WHOLE SONG at the end, and the song was coldplay, and it was as many lines as the whole story was, AND they put in every repeat line so that, like, some little phrases were in there 10 times. 20 times. 16 times. whatever. frequently four times in a row with nothing between.
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Date: 23 Nov 2003 01:58 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 23 Nov 2003 02:02 am (UTC)*feet, i presume.
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Date: 23 Nov 2003 02:04 am (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 23 Nov 2003 02:18 am (UTC)although violent dancing. hrm.
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Date: 23 Nov 2003 02:21 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 23 Nov 2003 02:34 am (UTC)::brightening:: i DO, however, approve of violence towards songfics.
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Date: 23 Nov 2003 02:37 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 23 Nov 2003 10:48 am (UTC)