fic! 'for england, home, and beauty'-- holmes/watson, nc-17

[cimorene]

title: for england, home, and beauty
author: cimorene
pairing: holmes/watson
rating: nc-17
disclaimer: these characters are the creations of sir arthur conan doyle, although since they're on the internet i guess they've passed into the public domain. they also owe a good deal--particularly in this story--a good deal to the performances of jeremy brett and edward hardwicke as holmes and watson respectively in the granada productions.
notes: this is a FILM-canon spackle of 'the bruce-partington plans.' i adore written canon, but the film canon's extreme slashiness was what gave me the idea. links to the original story and to my review of the dvd episode (with screencaps) are available inside the story.

(for england, home, and beauty)

Comments

[bethbethbeth.livejournal.com]

Oh, I *really* like this story, particularly how skillfully you capture Holmes' appeal (including his near-manic changeability) for Watson.

The quote you use for the final section - "It is fortunate for this community that I am not a criminal." - struck me as extremely appropriate, not only because Holmes *is* rather criminal in many of the things he does to solve cases, but also (of course) because by the end of the story, he and Watson have - by making love - added one more layer of "criminality" to their lives, at least a far as their (English) community is concerned.

(The only thing I might have liked to see would have been a slightly more significant role for Mycroft. I mean, as far as I remember, canon requires him to be there, but in that case it would have been nice to see him *doing* something, even if it's just giving a vaguely knowing look to Watson *g*)

In any case...this is a very lovely story and a pleasure to read.

[cimness.livejournal.com]

ooh, delightfully content-containing feedback! :)

well, i lifted that dialogue from the dvd, and mycroft *doesn't* give a knowing look to watson. i believe this is because mycroft, like holmes, has a sort of single-minded focus. there might be some reproach or surprise in his glance at holmes--ie at holmes's frivolity in choosing LAST NIGHT'S free time to get lucky. of course he can hardly miss the signs in holmes. i mean, the viewer can't miss them; he really is wonderfully dishevelled. what he says is something along the lines of 'splendid, sherlock! i always said you would have made an excellent cat-burglar.' i also like the character very well, but i didn't want to make the ending too long. was afraid of losing the momentum of the afterglow. although i'm sure you're right the story could have benefitted from more content of the actual case and less of the personal thingy. i'll try to see to that on my next attempt.