hp beta help?

[cimorene]

do you usually find that it's a good sign or a bad one when the title comes to you before the story?  that happened to me in the shower two days ago.  I ended up with this. 

now i need a british person with experience of harry potter, preferably snape/potter, and preferably also greek mythology, to beta a story.  ...please?





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the barbarism of a computer that ISN'T hooked continuously to the internet!  it's like a blind and deaf computer.  wearing gloves.  that doesn't know anything.

ps:  omg i forgot.  we passed a billboard on the way from the atlanta airport for PANTS STORE.  it turned out that my parents didn't know any of the british meanings of pants, literal or slang.

pps: browser:  mozilla runciblefrankrike

Comments

[wild-boys.livejournal.com]

British. Experience of Harry Potter. And some Greek mythology. That said, I'll probably be no help at all, but if you tell me what you want... :)

[cimness.livejournal.com]

no help at all: does this mean you aren't habitually of the beta persuasion, or what?

[wild-boys.livejournal.com]

Pretty much. Good on details though, à la Greek mythology and British syntax. Bad on Telling You What to Do With Your Story, but I suspect you know what to do with your story. Try me :)

[cimness.livejournal.com]

sure, why not? what's your email?

[wild-boys.livejournal.com]

wild_boys_smile@hotmail.com :)

[kmazzy.livejournal.com]

i am a sucky beta but i love greek mythology and i have read a lot of snape/potter and i def am british. so if i can help at all just let me know.

xxx

[cimness.livejournal.com]

sure, i could at least get your help with the britishspeak. what's your email?