new femmeslash story
19 Mar 2002 10:50 pmremember home (right. sure you do), which is she-ra/frosta and sweet bee/mermista based on the episode "sweet bee's home"? (she-ra being a cartoon).
well. i finished the sequel after four days of writing. i was posting teasers yesterday, but...
identity.
graphic f/f sex, pov and tense shifts, angst and unresolved issues, incest and abuse, magic, wild and sustained cim-metaphors. totally stereotypical me except for the added bleakness of the incest stuff. sequel to "home," but doesn't depend on any one episode; in fact, it's pretty well supplied with background. adora and she-ra are the same person, which is potentially confusing, but actually explained in the first scene, so.
so, another teaser. hmmmm.
When she stops, shading her eyes to watch for Swiftwind, in a waterfall of sun, it turns thick around her and gilds her eyelashes, painting white gleams on the full parts of her cheeks, flushing her nose.
--and also--
You want her mouth on your throat. You want to surprise her, want her eyes to go wide and shocked. You want her to want you so much her mouth is open and her breath rushes in and out in fast disbelieving pants, and when you come to her, you want her to smile as though the smile might tremble and break off her face, and you don't want to lose the image of it even in your dreams. Why, when you have what you want, do you persist in longing as though you want what you cannot have?
kk, your request for more graphic/pervasive f/f sex has been answered. ;)
well. i finished the sequel after four days of writing. i was posting teasers yesterday, but...
identity.
graphic f/f sex, pov and tense shifts, angst and unresolved issues, incest and abuse, magic, wild and sustained cim-metaphors. totally stereotypical me except for the added bleakness of the incest stuff. sequel to "home," but doesn't depend on any one episode; in fact, it's pretty well supplied with background. adora and she-ra are the same person, which is potentially confusing, but actually explained in the first scene, so.
so, another teaser. hmmmm.
When she stops, shading her eyes to watch for Swiftwind, in a waterfall of sun, it turns thick around her and gilds her eyelashes, painting white gleams on the full parts of her cheeks, flushing her nose.
--and also--
You want her mouth on your throat. You want to surprise her, want her eyes to go wide and shocked. You want her to want you so much her mouth is open and her breath rushes in and out in fast disbelieving pants, and when you come to her, you want her to smile as though the smile might tremble and break off her face, and you don't want to lose the image of it even in your dreams. Why, when you have what you want, do you persist in longing as though you want what you cannot have?
kk, your request for more graphic/pervasive f/f sex has been answered. ;)
what about my request?
Date: 19 Mar 2002 09:30 pm (UTC)Re: what about my request?
Date: 20 Mar 2002 08:34 pm (UTC)small child: I need change
me: what the fuck? Can't you see I'm reading something you little shit?
small child: *cries*
me: ::continues reading::
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Date: 20 Mar 2002 04:52 am (UTC)