sex scenes

sometimes it's easy to write good sex and sometimes it's hard. the first night's sex in my story is graphic and porny and hot, and the later stuff--skims over important bits with metaphors and talking about feelings because it's afraid to bore itself or the reader with repetitiveness or get too embarrassingly self-absorbed.

but why? where did the good, unashamedly porny sex go? i can't let this story out into the public domain until it's at least evened up a bit.

edit. well, um, there it was. heh.

meantime

omg, colin's glasses are tortoiseshell.

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TOOK 308 CAPS OF MEANTIME. ♥

when perhael said she was writing coxy/colin, i thought, from the descriptions i'd read, "isn't coxy his brother's friend?" but ahhaha. now i think about it, i read an early interview where it talked about colin being led astray. perfect!

meantime.

asdöfljf.

i knew meantime would give me bunnies, but i kind of thought they would be fps bunnies.

well, okay. i mean, it's not like there couldn't be fps bunnies but the one with its teeth in me reprises the TIM ROTH I THINK YOU'RE SEXY TOO material of better than one.

...to be fair, that was a kind of half-realised ficlet with no smut or anything.

ohgod. quick, lilah someone, encourage me.

no! nononono!

WHY IS THERE NEWSPAPER IN THE DOG BARF

EWWWWWW