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waiting is (≈6700 words)
by cimorene
prince of tennis
tezuka/ryoma, hard r
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fuji has a cabin in the mountains. sometimes he lends it to more than one person at a time.
by cimorene
prince of tennis
tezuka/ryoma, hard r
for
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fuji has a cabin in the mountains. sometimes he lends it to more than one person at a time.
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Date: 14 May 2006 04:58 am (UTC)The descriptions and the imagery are gorgeous, and I love your characterization, especially Tezuka. Their interactions are perfect, too. Lovely! Thank you for this, I needed it tonight. ♥
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Date: 14 May 2006 04:09 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 14 May 2006 05:21 am (UTC)♥ ♥ this is soft and slow and liquid and so good and tezuka and ryoma are beacons of warmth together and and and and and. OH. so lovely!
♥♥♥♥♥
COHERENT FEEDBACK LATER.
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Date: 14 May 2006 04:06 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 14 May 2006 05:54 am (UTC)♥!
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Date: 14 May 2006 04:05 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 14 May 2006 06:08 am (UTC)The answer, of course, was YES. I've been waiting for this all weekend long and OHGOD was it worth the wait. ♥
The tone, the exchanges, the atmosphere - it was all perfect. I really love the way they relate to one another and they're not so easy to write this well. I know, I've tried.
Gah, thank you for writing this and for sharing it. I know I'll read it a hundred more times.
Just beautiful, hon.
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Date: 14 May 2006 04:02 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 14 May 2006 08:19 pm (UTC)*laughs* And I got all warm and fuzzy from the TakaFuji - I was most appreciative of that. ♥ I got the most adorable mental image of Fuji zipping up Taka's parka and fixing his hat before ventured out into the snow.
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Date: 14 May 2006 06:46 am (UTC)I had to read it three times to get ever little detail. Every line is just so oh, ah, and aww. The best scene was the name part since it was more intimate than anything else to me.
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Date: 14 May 2006 03:58 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 14 May 2006 09:00 am (UTC)Sweet!
Thanks for sharing ;)
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Date: 14 May 2006 03:56 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 14 May 2006 04:01 pm (UTC)Anyways, go you!
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Date: 14 May 2006 10:43 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 14 May 2006 03:39 pm (UTC);)
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Date: 14 May 2006 03:42 pm (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 14 May 2006 04:34 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 14 May 2006 11:46 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 14 May 2006 03:53 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 14 May 2006 07:48 pm (UTC)And to be honest your fic was far beyond a simple "hot", but seriously; wow. Your Tezuka point of view was my personal favorite, since he seems to be a tough nut. ;D
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Date: 15 May 2006 04:36 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 15 May 2006 09:25 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 14 May 2006 04:23 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 15 May 2006 01:20 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 14 May 2006 06:25 pm (UTC)I loved how Ryoma is waiting and we think it's for tennis but it's not and then I loved Tezuka's fascination with wrists and the names and mostly just ♥♥ and cuddling.
I also love how you are able to take things like spin the bottle and getting snowed in at a cabin and somehow write it so perfectly that I'm left completely in awe and it's like the first time I've ever seen the ideas before.
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Date: 15 May 2006 01:33 pm (UTC)i love waiting as a theme because it's so wistful and poignant and romantic, so it's probably a part of what i love about this pairing - the restraint and patience and certainty all wrapped up with angst.
and for the rest um, eek, thank you! again. <.< *blush* sometimes i just love clichés. they can be very powerful.
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Date: 14 May 2006 10:22 pm (UTC)♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
I went online five minutes before leaving for work this morning, and nearly cried when I saw that you'd posted it. :\
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Date: 15 May 2006 01:23 pm (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 26 Mar 2007 03:50 am (UTC)i want to be warmed by Tezuka too