Badfic never fails. Or always fails, depending on how you look at it.

[cimorene]

Someone posted this as a story summary.

"Can relationships be based just on sex? Jun writes thinking to himself as the woman who's name he had already forgotten slept quietly at his side. She never talks. He thinks to himself later on. Walking down the long, dark hallway that no good can come from, he shivers. That girl that never spoke had died."

... Okay, so. Reading that paragraph gives me the eerie feeling that I'm half asleep, or slightly tipsy.

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Comments

[daegaer.livejournal.com]

Did she die before or after Jun had sex with her, that's what I want to know . . .

[cimness.livejournal.com]

I'm afraid we may never find out, if this is the kind of grammar we have to go on...

[kyuuketsukirui.livejournal.com]

WOW. There's bad and then there's bad and this is just...wow. O_o

Also, the first time I read it, I read it as "Jun thinks of himself as the woman who's name he had already forgotten", which would be a much better fic.

[cimness.livejournal.com]

Possibly even more confusing, but definitely better!