beta request for teen wolf rpf

[cimorene]

I translated a fic and I need a native English speaker to look over it for, you know, translation remnants - things that are out of place in English - for me. It's Teen Wolf RPF, Tyler Hoechlin/Dylan O'Brien, and around 8000 words.

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[cimorene]

Hmm good point. I'm not sure why I sort of feel like I should be more embarrassed about Teen Wolf than about Arashi. Although the actual period of embarrassment was pretty much congruent with the period of futile resistance and lasted less than a week.