That makes Kili something like one of his mitochondria. Also, the galaxy should be, say, a kidney.

[cimorene]

1. Thorin is the universe, and Kili is the moon. Thorin isn't sure when exactly they became a part of the galaxy, but the dwarves that watch them are silent stars to an ocean of colours.


2. What if The Hobbit was really an early 19th century romance novel?


3. Thorin dreams...or does he?


4. A very short chapter because I felt I didn't get an overly encouraging reception to the last one. I'd love to know what I did wrong and whether I should bother continuing; university starts in a few weeks and I'm willing to put in the time if people want me to but otherwise I might be better off letting this die down.


5. Customs and courtships. Both very serious, and at times quite superficial. But always unnannounced and never discreet. [The hell? What language is this?]

Comments

[starfish]

What if The Hobbit was really an early 19th century romance novel?

Wait -- you mean it isn't?

[cimorene]

IKR.

[torachan]

That first one is AWESOME. Nothing better than ~poetic~ comparisons to things when you have no clue what the words you're using actually mean.

[cimorene]

It's like they googled "astronomy wordlist".

"Thorin is the GRAPH PAPER and Kili is the COSINE. Thorin isn't sure when exactly they became a part of the PARABOLA, but the dwarves that watch them are silent TANGENTS to an ocean of colours."