just like all those girls (≈7800 words)
arashi rps, matsumoto jun/aiba masaki (ohmiya implied); explicit
thanks to
elfiepike,
isilya, and
perhael.
arashi rps, matsumoto jun/aiba masaki (ohmiya implied); explicit
thanks to
Just the thought of that is hot, for Jun, it's - he can't get it out of his head and he's getting hard thinking about her breasts (with Aiba's hands on them, Aiba's long fingers on the neck of a low shirt, the lacy edges of a coloured bra showing), and - breasts, he likes them, like miniskirts or women's shoes, he appreciates good ones and he can tell bad ones, but he's never yet got a hard-on over breasts without Aiba's hands on them.
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Date: 25 Nov 2006 04:57 pm (UTC)beat uphave my minions whine at dreamhost again. x.x(no subject)
Date: 26 Nov 2006 01:15 am (UTC)Totally worth the wait, babe. This wasn't fictional smut, this was emotional art.
Love your writing and I loved how real and well-paced this was. Thank you for sharing that.
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Date: 28 Nov 2006 07:18 pm (UTC)WOW!
WOW WOW WOW!
No seriously. I loved it. It is one of the really rare fics where you can't just change names and then have another pairing (whisadly happens way too often).
I liked how you played with clichees (like Aiba NOT being pressed against Jun in the tram. And I really apprechiated the small het part.
And I petter not start with commenting on the language for it was just beautifully written and I'd end up writing a novel if I went into details.
really: great job!
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Date: 15 Dec 2006 10:33 am (UTC)i can sympathise with your position, though. there was not an absence of sho because i love him any less! sometime i will have to write something with him.
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