cimorene

i like to go deep enough into a character to get tangled in their trains of thought. i'm not sure how good i am at writing these, though. this has just occurred to me. i mean, if real people think things that don't make sense, they don't think them in ways that don't make sense to them, and if you're so entirely within the character, maybe it's cheating to write it so the reader can see inconsistencies? then again, maybe they won't pay close enough attention--just get totally confused ('note: HANG ON!').

well, whatever. i seem to have re-encountered my 'pie' (although i'm still not sure what precisely that is...). i'm going to finish this story and write something original where i won't keep stumbling over my preconceptions of canon.

also, have mom's minestrone to heat for lunch. after lunch, i have been promised, the big!boss!plumber will arrive. i found an email from dave, who is concerned about plumber alarmist tactics and doesn't want to be cheated. i'm not sure, anymore, if he actually wants to plumber to attempt to fix anything or not.

well, we'll see.