on notice

[cimorene]

With contributions from aeslis and bexless.

On "sliding in to the hilt": aeslis: It might be a fairy tale sword.
On "lathered": bexless: Are there bubbles?
On "gasping for air": aeslis: Have you never kissed anyone? Did you forget you have a nose?

Comments

[msilverstar]

I hate "lave" and have since I started in fandom.

And "fisting hair" or "fisting the covers" or the worst, "fisting his cock". That word no longer works for anything innocent. "Grabbing", "pulling", "clutching", but not "fisting".

[cimorene]

Fisting can occasionally be really hilarious though! Like when that poor clueless woman said in the news that the Obamas are affectionate in public because of the "hugging, kissing... even fisting!" when she meant "fist-bumping". Top 10 HILARIOUS kinky-sex related moments man.

[brownbetty]

asdjf;lskdjf LATHERED.

[mirabella]

I have never understood the whole thing with having to quit kissing to breathe. I see it everywhere. Why? Does everyone in the world have chronic rhinitis but us? Do people think you're supposed to hold your breath? The mind boggles.

[cimorene]

I think they FORGOT to breathe. You see, the emotions aroused by the kiss were so intense that they forgot about their noses.

[inalasahl]

Have you never kissed anyone? Did you forget you have a nose?
YES! Why do so. many. fics. have people stopping their kisses so they can breathe? I've started assuming that authors simply can't think of a reason for their characters to ever stop kissing.

Either that or they are all mouth-breathers.