fic post: sga: "instantaneous", sheppard/mckay, nc-17, 129K

[cimorene]

instantaneous
by cimorene
sheppard/mckay, nc-17, mid-s1, 129K
beta by isilya and giddygeek (♥!) and invaluable help from kaneko, julad and wax_jism.

"God, life is so unfair.  I find what appears to be the sole personal teleportation device in the city, it decides it likes you, and what do you do with it?  Save the city with a stunning feat of bravery and tactical prowess?  No.  You don't even bring me coffee--you use it to increase your repertoire of juvenile humour with a prank that three-year-olds have been carrying off successfully without teleportation probably for centuries."

Comments

[coreopsis.livejournal.com]

Oh, okay. Apparently I'm too dim for hints today (I'm sick and medicated :) and need things spelled out. *g*

It was a minor quibble anyway. As much as I enjoyed the plot and the action, John's yearning for Rodney is what really made me happiest. That was really, really well done. *g*

[cimness.livejournal.com]

i knew i was at risk of too much subtlety there, but i accepted it for the greater good, i.e., concentrating on the yearning myself. thank you for the compliment!