rookie mistake

[cimorene]

Dear Badthors,

Please remember that commas don't go between nouns and the adjectives describing them!

Thank You,
Cim

Comments

[revulo.livejournal.com]

"She bit into the green, apple, smiling. Her brown eyes, orbs of chocolate, sparkled in delight."

That hurt to write. I shall never do that again.

[cobweb-diamond.livejournal.com]

well your just a big, meanie.

[medize.livejournal.com]

You're totally, correct.