cimorene: cartoony drawing of a woman's head in profile giving dubious side-eye (i kind of dig this)
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Dear Badthors,

Please remember that commas don't go between nouns and the adjectives describing them!

Thank You,
Cim

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Date: 6 Nov 2008 08:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] revulo.livejournal.com
"She bit into the green, apple, smiling. Her brown eyes, orbs of chocolate, sparkled in delight."

That hurt to write. I shall never do that again.

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Date: 7 Nov 2008 12:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cobweb-diamond.livejournal.com
well your just a big, meanie.

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Date: 7 Nov 2008 03:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] medize.livejournal.com
You're totally, correct.

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